Fernando G. I like how you used a famous celebraty to show the point you are trying to get across.I think that this will help the younger generation follow their dreams
Dear Fernando , I like how your song goes with the flow of the video and connects to the message that you tried to send out , I also like how you had more than 2 facts about street events
I like how your PSA explains the situation of the person your talking about. You were very specific in the facts that you chose, and you described in detail the importance of this topic. overall i think you did a great job, on showing to the public how serious and inmportant teen pregnancy is.
Your PSA was very strong, I like that you gave a real life situation with a teenage girl and then explained her story about her life and how being a teen mother has changed her life. The music also changed the mood of the PSA, it made me more interested in watching the PSA. I think you did a good choice on music; you also had also connected the topic to your community with a certain latina statistic. Overall, your PSA was powerful and I think you did a very good job catching your viewers attention. -Amanda D.
Edelin, I like how you were talking directly at the audience. You were not talking in general. I Also liked how you took a stand on something important and something that clearly happens to a lot of girls.The evidence you used were not a lot of statistics but it was very convincing. The music selection was Perfect! The song goes great with the PSA topic. I Liked the pictures that you used. Some of them were very useful and they were very important to the topic. Over all your PSA was convincing and it was great.
Arlene, I like your choice of voice. Angel Haze's poem has deep meanings and it is able to get to people. The way the PSA is presented is creative and it shows clearly what it'll be about. You could have used a bit more evidence but otherwise it is nice and short. _Yesenia
Dear Ronald, I was really interested while watching your PSA. I thought that on a scale of creativity i thought that it got a exceeding grade. It was really good. The pictures were very well chosen, i was caught in the moment. The facts were very good as well and you deserve a good grade. ~Byron Garcia, 9LE
Yesenia, Your PSA about rape is very well thought out and it made me feel kind of emotional because I wouldn't want that to happen to me. You had very good facts and interesting pictures. You put up pictures with real people and that made it feel more realistic and it makes me want to do something about this. This PSA was very well done. -Kathy Tavarez, 9LE
Erika, You had a very interesting choice of music, but i think that is the amusing part of the PSA, also you had a lot of information and statistics which showed that you worked hard on making sure you had enough information to pursuade the viewer. Overall, i think you did a good job :) -Amanda D.
Erika, I like how, your PSA, gave a lot of examples and facts that show, how bullying and suicide, affect the community, and the people going through it. Also i like how you gave a solution, to the problem. But I was a little confused, on what the topic was but, overall you were very detailed, and informatived about the problem.
Yohan, Your PSA about knowing your rights. You used many facts showing the rights. I think you choose this PSA at a apporopiate time because cops are being recklass now a days. What you could have done better was that you could have added more facts or pictures of cops abusing people to get your point across.
Byron, I like the song and topic you chose for your PSA and i thought it was very interesting and mind-blowing. Next time i think you should put the slides up for a longer time because I couldnt read the whole slide. -Xavier
Yohan, I like your PSA it has many issues that are relevant to washington heights. I like the music it was very interesting because people have manyrights they don't know about. I would give you a 4/4 in film elements. You had many interesting pictures and the song was good.
Yesenia,I enjoyed watching you PSA on rape.I found it powerful in many ways. I thought that you did an excellent with your use of facts. Also, the images you used give your PSA an emotional touch. However, I would like to know who is your target audience in specific. Is is people who have been raped? If it, is it to teens who have been raped or just anybody in general that has been raped. Other than that, your PSA was very enjoyable and your music selection fit the "mood" of your topic. -Arlene Salcedo♥ 9LE.
Yohan, I appreciate how your soundtrack fits the topic of your PSA. Furthermore, you had several call to action. Your evidence could have been stronger towards the topic. Also, you could have added some examples. -Ronald
Amanda, your PSA is very good and it definitely has a strong voice. It creates a sense of sympathy for the children that are being abused and are suffering at home. I like how your PSA is emotional and you have many strong facts to support your overall message. You have a strong voice and you definitely expressed it well in your PSA. Great job! -Erika Cabrera
Nataly, Your PSA on animal abuse is very touching. Your choice of music corresponded to the video, but your evidence was a little hard to follow because it was so fast.Your pictures and evidence are very persuasive but your grammar could've been better. -Lhia,9LE
Dear Yesenia, I was very intrigued by your PSA on rape. I feel that it was very powerful in the way that all the facts were presented.One thing that really stood out to me was the structure and organizaton. Your audio really set the mood and you clearly put a lot of effort into your PSA.- Reyna
Roanld, Great hook! The song really attracts the audience within the very few seconds of the song. The PSA had a clear beginning, middle and end and demonstrated a clear topic throught the entire PSA. Excellent job on your call to action. Your evidence really shocked the audience including myself.
Yohan, I like how your music, explained the topic/ concept you were trying to explain to the public. Also I like how you gave examples from television that had to do with your topic. Overall I like how you explained your topic, and what you can do about.
Yesenia- I thought your PSA was very interesting. A strong point in your PSA was how you combined all the music pictures and facts to create a PSA that is well combined to show a point in the story. Another strong point is that you had a clear start, middle, and end point for woman who had been raped.
Arlene, I like your Psa About teen Suicide because of the overvoice that read the words you worte on your psa. I like the artistic presents that you put into making that psa and that you used more than 6 facts that supported your idea and the entier Psa Was thought through and it was amazing.-Keanu Abreu
Anthony, Your PSA is very local and it seems like a big issue for people in Washington Heights. Out of several school in New York City, WHEELS in one of the best high schools because you could tell that the kids are actually trying to get past high school and college as well. Your PSA has very good pictures and the song played goes well with it. -Kathy Tavarez, 9LE
Scarlet, I like how your PSA has a song that fits the mood. The way that you used the affects really helped with the viewers understanding. The information that you used was good but I think that you could have added more information. I enjoyed watching it and I think that it can really change the minds of the young teens out here.
Erika, I enjoyed watching your PSA on bullying. Your PSA was very strong. I think that the facts you used were very specific about bullying. I like the fact that you used the voice of a kid who was thinking about commiting sucide because he was bullied in your PSA. I also like the song you used it was a very creative choice. -Arlin Guillen
TO Byran; I like the way you pick the topic about the earth and littering. Your PSA is good, pictures are local and specific and your visual presentation was awesome. I like the green affect that you did went well with everything you where saying and showing. The only problem I had was reading some if of the stuff you put i really didn't get to see the info. So for the next time just make the words a bit longer so people can read and be more into your PSA.
Dear Xiara, I really enjoyed watching your PSA on rape/sexual abuse. It was very touching to me because the images that you use were perfect for the topic. Also the song kept me very entertain and it had a sad tune to it which was perfect.I loved it! -Edelin C.
Emily ,I really like the idea you had to connect the music to you PSA.I also thought that you information was good but you could have being more clear on who it was to. For example are you doing this for people who do the wrong things or for people who see it and led it happen?
To: amanda - I really like the way on how you added the soft music, it really goes with the video. you should of have made the hotline number a little bit longer if someone wants to call the number. But over all the pictures were really touching and the information was really amazing. -wualez
I like the way your PSA was very specific. You used facts on how smoking will affect someone and you used real life situations how ever i think you could have added more to it in like facts and your opinion as well.
Edelin I loved the way you said that everyone is beautiful. I like the way you talk directly to your audience and I love everything about it.. Good job!! Alfha Gonzalez
Dear Edelin, I like how you added really good information that girls and boys need to know. I really like how your captions showed the insecuirty of girls and how they look at them selfs. Channel Santiago
dear Nunez, i like the way of how you created your PSA because it relates it of how people get in over weight,one suggestion that i have is that your song it doesn't relate that much with your PSA, but i think you did really good job. -scarlet.
Dear Edlin I love the meaning over your PSA because a lot of girls do feel that way . Also this is a very unique PSA, also you where very specific and well detailed in it. Also you did well in the people you are talking to. -Xiara
Dear scarlet i liked how you used the song to represent the emotions and the way you feel about this type of teens and how you used especific pictures like from google and all that and alson how many people die that psa was very intresting and very intresting to watch by :ashley morel
WTejada your PSA is good, it has facts and good examples. Also it was very creative in the way of showing images. This PSA is my favorite.-Victor Liz 9SM
Dear kathy, I really like your PSA it was really good it took my attion real quick.People that are geting buillied would find this very helpful because of the information you gave out.
Dear Channel, I really liked your PSA because it was very local and specific. I'm glad that you chose to write about this topic because many young women that have a child don't have no place to go for help and your PSA had local places were women can visit, by the way you selected nice images. - Edelin Contreras/9SM
Dear xiara, i really like yours because it really did spoke out especially the song you put as the background it went very well with the pictures.You can see that you took a goood amount of time doing your PSA goood job :)
Dear Joseph, i really liked your music it caught my attention to watch it till the end. You did good job showing what you want making people ask them self questions i think that was very good:) Julyssa Genao
dear Edelin; i like the way of how you created your PSA because it convince me of how teens girls are uncomfortable the way of how they look, also because because your PSA is very specific.and the song goes with your PSA. GOOD JOB. -SCARLET.
Dear Sally, Your PSA was very nice and specific. I really,really like it a lot because it shows tons of examples and it clearly shows that you had done plenty of research on BULLYING! I agree with you we shall put a stop to bullying because it can lead to serious problems. Nice PSA!!!:)
Dear Alfha, I enjoyed watching your PSA because it was very local because many people don't exercise and they don't know how important it is to do that. This PSA could be able to change many people's opinions about excising.
Dear Scarlet, I like your PSA because it is a local topic about teenagers getting pregnant. I think that they are different ways to stop pregnancies. Anyways you had a lot of FACTS and good pictures that went good with the PSA. -EdelinC.
Dear Nataly, I just love, love your PSA. I like it because it shows great FACTS about animals that get abuse also,the images that you chose went perfect with the video. Nice Job! -EdelinC.
Dear Edelin, i love your PSA you can tell it was planed very well i love love it,and the song goes perfect with it.the pictures you put and facts,questions you put are awesome you could actually feel something when you see it.
Dear Jessica, Your PSA was very unique & it stood out to me in many ways. One way was that instead of using only images you also used a video that went perfectly with your topic. You also switched to images that had to do with bullying. I like how you use different songs and everything. After all nice job with your PSA <33:)-EdelinC.
Dear Marisol, I love your PSA!! While I was watching it it touched me and I understand why you chose to write about this topic since it is very controversial. I agree with you i'm also AGAINST ABORTION and hopefully this video would help out many girls out their that abortion is wrong. -EdelinC.:)
Fernando G.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a famous celebraty to show the point you are trying to get across.I think that this will help the younger generation follow their dreams
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DeleteDear Fernando ,
DeleteI like how your song goes with the flow of the video and connects to the message that you tried to send out , I also like how you had more than 2 facts about street events
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ReplyDeleteTo: Reyna Moreno
ReplyDeleteI like how your PSA explains the situation of the person your talking about. You were very specific in the facts that you chose, and you described in detail the importance of this topic. overall i think you did a great job, on showing to the public how serious and inmportant teen pregnancy is.
To: Reyna Moreno
ReplyDeleteYour PSA was very strong, I like that you gave a real life situation with a teenage girl and then explained her story about her life and how being a teen mother has changed her life. The music also changed the mood of the PSA, it made me more interested in watching the PSA. I think you did a good choice on music; you also had also connected the topic to your community with a certain latina statistic. Overall, your PSA was powerful and I think you did a very good job catching your viewers attention.
-Amanda D.
Edelin, I like how you were talking directly at the audience. You were not talking in general. I Also liked how you took a stand on something important and something that clearly happens to a lot of girls.The evidence you used were not a lot of statistics but it was very convincing. The music selection was Perfect! The song goes great with the PSA topic. I Liked the pictures that you used. Some of them were very useful and they were very important to the topic. Over all your PSA was convincing and it was great.
ReplyDeleteArlene, I like your choice of voice. Angel Haze's poem has deep meanings and it is able to get to people. The way the PSA is presented is creative and it shows clearly what it'll be about. You could have used a bit more evidence but otherwise it is nice and short.
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Dear Ronald,
ReplyDeleteI was really interested while watching your PSA. I thought that on a scale of creativity i thought that it got a exceeding grade. It was really good. The pictures were very well chosen, i was caught in the moment. The facts were very good as well and you deserve a good grade. ~Byron Garcia, 9LE
Yesenia,
ReplyDeleteYour PSA about rape is very well thought out and it made me feel kind of emotional because I wouldn't want that to happen to me. You had very good facts and interesting pictures. You put up pictures with real people and that made it feel more realistic and it makes me want to do something about this. This PSA was very well done.
-Kathy Tavarez, 9LE
Erika,
ReplyDeleteYou had a very interesting choice of music, but i think that is the amusing part of the PSA, also you had a lot of information and statistics which showed that you worked hard on making sure you had enough information to pursuade the viewer. Overall, i think you did a good job :)
-Amanda D.
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ReplyDeleteErika, I like how, your PSA, gave a lot of examples and facts that show, how bullying and suicide, affect the community, and the people going through it. Also i like how you gave a solution, to the problem. But I was a little confused, on what the topic was but, overall you were very detailed, and informatived about the problem.
ReplyDeleteYohan,
ReplyDeleteYour PSA about knowing your rights. You used many facts showing the rights. I think you choose this PSA at a apporopiate time because cops are being recklass now a days. What you could have done better was that you could have added more facts or pictures of cops abusing people to get your point across.
Byron, I like the song and topic you chose for your PSA and i thought it was very interesting and mind-blowing. Next time i think you should put the slides up for a longer time because I couldnt read the whole slide.
ReplyDelete-Xavier
Thanks a lot for your feedback Xavier now that i look at it for a second time i understand what you're trying to sat.
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DeleteYohan, I like your PSA it has many issues that are relevant to washington heights. I like the music it was very interesting because people have manyrights they don't know about. I would give you a 4/4 in film elements. You had many interesting pictures and the song was good.
ReplyDeleteYesenia,I enjoyed watching you PSA on rape.I found it powerful in many ways. I thought that you did an excellent with your use of facts. Also, the images you used give your PSA an emotional touch. However, I would like to know who is your target audience in specific. Is is people who have been raped? If it, is it to teens who have been raped or just anybody in general that has been raped. Other than that, your PSA was very enjoyable and your music selection fit the "mood" of your topic. -Arlene Salcedo♥ 9LE.
ReplyDeleteYohan,
ReplyDeleteI appreciate how your soundtrack fits the topic of your PSA. Furthermore, you had several call to action. Your evidence could have been stronger towards the topic. Also, you could have added some examples.
-Ronald
Amanda, your PSA is very good and it definitely has a strong voice. It creates a sense of sympathy for the children that are being abused and are suffering at home. I like how your PSA is emotional and you have many strong facts to support your overall message. You have a strong voice and you definitely expressed it well in your PSA. Great job!
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Nataly,
ReplyDeleteYour PSA on animal abuse is very touching. Your choice of music corresponded to the video, but your evidence was a little hard to follow because it was so fast.Your pictures and evidence are very persuasive but your grammar could've been better.
-Lhia,9LE
Dear Yesenia,
ReplyDeleteI was very intrigued by your PSA on rape. I feel that it was very powerful in the way that all the facts were presented.One thing that really stood out to me was the structure and organizaton. Your audio really set the mood and you clearly put a lot of effort into your PSA.- Reyna
Roanld,
ReplyDeleteGreat hook! The song really attracts the audience within the very few seconds of the song. The PSA had a clear beginning, middle and end and demonstrated a clear topic throught the entire PSA. Excellent job on your call to action. Your evidence really shocked the audience including myself.
- Anthony Vargas, 9LE
Yohan,
ReplyDeleteI like how your music, explained the topic/ concept you were trying to explain to the public. Also I like how you gave examples from television that had to do with your topic. Overall I like how you explained your topic, and what you can do about.
Yesenia- I thought your PSA was very interesting. A strong point in your PSA was how you combined all the music pictures and facts to create a PSA that is well combined to show a point in the story. Another strong point is that you had a clear start, middle, and end point for woman who had been raped.
ReplyDeleteArlene,
ReplyDeleteI like your Psa About teen Suicide because of the overvoice that read the words you worte on your psa. I like the artistic presents that you put into making that psa and that you used more than 6 facts that supported your idea and the entier Psa Was thought through and it was amazing.-Keanu Abreu
Anthony,
ReplyDeleteYour PSA is very local and it seems like a big issue for people in Washington Heights. Out of several school in New York City, WHEELS in one of the best high schools because you could tell that the kids are actually trying to get past high school and college as well. Your PSA has very good pictures and the song played goes well with it.
-Kathy Tavarez, 9LE
Scarlet, I like how your PSA has a song that fits the mood. The way that you used the affects really helped with the viewers understanding. The information that you used was good but I think that you could have added more information. I enjoyed watching it and I think that it can really change the minds of the young teens out here.
ReplyDeleteErika, I enjoyed watching your PSA on bullying. Your PSA was very strong. I think that the facts you used were very specific about bullying. I like the fact that you used the voice of a kid who was thinking about commiting sucide because he was bullied in your PSA. I also like the song you used it was a very creative choice.
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TO Byran;
ReplyDeleteI like the way you pick the topic about the earth and littering. Your PSA is good, pictures are local and specific and your visual presentation was awesome. I like the green affect that you did went well with everything you where saying and showing. The only problem I had was reading some if of the stuff you put i really didn't get to see the info. So for the next time just make the words a bit longer so people can read and be more into your PSA.
XGuzman your PSA has good facts but you need to make it longer to show the audience how important it is. -Victor Liz 9SM
ReplyDeleteDear Xiara,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your PSA on rape/sexual abuse. It was very touching to me because the images that you use were perfect for the topic. Also the song kept me very entertain and it had a sad tune to it which was perfect.I loved it! -Edelin C.
Emily ,I really like the idea you had to connect the music to you PSA.I also thought that you information was good but you could have being more clear on who it was to. For example are you doing this for people who do the wrong things or for people who see it and led it happen?
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ReplyDeleteTo: amanda
ReplyDelete- I really like the way on how you added the soft music, it really goes with the video. you should of have made the hotline number a little bit longer if someone wants to call the number. But over all the pictures were really touching and the information was really amazing.
-wualez
DEAR EDELIN
ReplyDeleteI SAW UR VIDEO AND YOU WERE REALLY SPECIFIC ABOUT UR TOPIC I THINK U DID REALLY GOOD :)
I like the way your PSA was very specific. You used facts on how smoking will affect someone and you used real life situations how ever i think you could have added more to it in like facts and your opinion as well.
ReplyDeleteEdelin I loved the way you said that everyone is beautiful. I like the way you talk directly to your audience and I love everything about it.. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteAlfha Gonzalez
Dear Edelin,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added really good information that girls and boys need to know. I really like how your captions showed the insecuirty of girls and how they look at them selfs.
Channel Santiago
Channel, I really thought it was smart to put an show that shows what you topic is and how it is a problem . I thought you ideas were great !
ReplyDeleteDEAR LHIA
ReplyDeleteAWESOME VIDEO U KNOW WHAT WAS IMPORTANT U WANT EVERY ONE TO KNOW ABOUT YOUR VIDEO YAY :D
dear Nunez,
ReplyDeletei like the way of how you created your PSA because it relates it of how people get in over weight,one suggestion that i have is that your song it doesn't relate that much with your PSA, but i think you did really good job.
-scarlet.
DEAR ALFHA
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THE MUSIC AND THE PHOTOS THEY FIT PERFECTLY TOGETHER AND WHY WE NEED TO EXERCISE U GAVE GOOD REASONS WHY :]
Dear scarlet,
ReplyDeleteI love your PSA its very good and I love the way you tried to persuade people to prevent teen pregnancy. Nice!!
Dear Edlin
ReplyDeleteI love the meaning over your PSA because a lot of girls do feel that way . Also this is a very unique PSA, also you where very specific and well detailed in it. Also you did well in the people you are talking to.
-Xiara
Dear Nataly,
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you tried to persuade people to stop animal abuse.. I loved it...
Alfha Gonzalez.
Dear scarlet i liked how you used the song to represent the emotions and the way you feel about this type of teens and how you used especific pictures like from google and all that and alson how many people die that psa was very intresting and very intresting to watch by :ashley morel
ReplyDeleteWTejada your PSA is good, it has facts and good examples. Also it was very creative in the way of showing images. This PSA is my favorite.-Victor Liz 9SM
ReplyDeleteDear kathy,
ReplyDeleteI really like your PSA it was really good it took my attion real quick.People that are geting buillied would find this very helpful because of the information you gave out.
DeaR Channel
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you talked directly to your audience.. I liked it.
Alfha Gonzalez
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ReplyDeleteDear Channel,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your PSA because it was very local and specific. I'm glad that you chose to write about this topic because many young women that have a child don't have no place to go for help and your PSA had local places were women can visit, by the way you selected nice images. - Edelin Contreras/9SM
Dear xiara,
ReplyDeletei really like yours because it really did spoke out especially the song you put as the background it went very well with the pictures.You can see that you took a goood amount of time doing your PSA goood job :)
Dear Joseph, i really liked your music it caught my attention to watch it till the end. You did good job showing what you want making people ask them self questions i think that was very good:) Julyssa Genao
ReplyDeletedear Edelin;
ReplyDeletei like the way of how you created your PSA because it convince me of how teens girls are uncomfortable the way of how they look, also because because your PSA is very specific.and the song goes with your PSA.
GOOD JOB. -SCARLET.
Dear Sally,
ReplyDeleteYour PSA was very nice and specific. I really,really like it a lot because it shows tons of examples and it clearly shows that you had done plenty of research on BULLYING! I agree with you we shall put a stop to bullying because it can lead to serious problems. Nice PSA!!!:)
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ReplyDeleteDear Alfha,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your PSA because it was very local because many people don't exercise and they don't know how important it is to do that. This PSA could be able to change many people's opinions about excising.
Dear Scarlet,
ReplyDeleteI like your PSA because it is a local topic about teenagers getting pregnant. I think that they are different ways to stop pregnancies. Anyways you had a lot of FACTS and good pictures that went good with the PSA. -EdelinC.
Dear Nataly,
ReplyDeleteI just love, love your PSA. I like it because it shows great FACTS about animals that get abuse also,the images that you chose went perfect with the video. Nice Job! -EdelinC.
Dear Edelin,
ReplyDeletei love your PSA you can tell it was planed very well i love love it,and the song goes perfect with it.the pictures you put and facts,questions you put are awesome you could actually feel something when you see it.
Dear Jessica,
ReplyDeleteYour PSA was very unique & it stood out to me in many ways. One way was that instead of using only images you also used a video that went perfectly with your topic. You also switched to images that had to do with bullying. I like how you use different songs and everything. After all nice job with your PSA <33:)-EdelinC.
Dear Marisol,
ReplyDeleteI love your PSA!! While I was watching it it touched me and I understand why you chose to write about this topic since it is very controversial. I agree with you i'm also AGAINST ABORTION and hopefully this video would help out many girls out their that abortion is wrong. -EdelinC.:)